Letter: Too much attribution in Vail Daily story
Re: Postal worker showed off genitals, D.A. says
He says, she says, D.A. says. I mean come on, Steve Lynn. You were on a roll for a while, before you picked up your bad writing habits again. I find it very annoying that you put said at the end of every paragraph, and even in the headline. Your writing is very deceiving, because you are a great writer, but this small flaw distracts the reader’s attention from the article and the good writing.
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