Nice job with story about Vail Mountain School graduation
Vail, CO, Colorado
Lauren Glendenning: The story you wrote about last evening’s Vail Mountain School Commencement was exceptional. You captured a two-hour ceremony in two short columns perfectly. Your writing conveyed keen understanding of the sentiments as well as the content of the students’ speeches.
I think Mia Bandoni, Robert Fitz, and Cynthia Edgerton will be pleased to read what you selected to highlight from their talks in your piece.
A newspaper article complements a special event in the lives of young people when it is so well written. Thank you for doing that.
Head of School, Vail Mountain School